Monday, April 27, 2009

Inspirational Insight

The following poem was discovered on the whiteboard in my studio waiting area. The author is a piano student of mine and she composed this piece while her mother was taking her own piano lesson this evening.

After her mother and I both read this piece, she said that she just likes to match words that rhyme. The poet is in the third grade. She chose a red dry erase marker. And the shape of the words resembled a heart.


Relize

I look in your eyes and finally relize
That all I can see in you is me
I tug you close and then I find that
Only roses are in your mind I stroke
Your skin It feels so pure cause it
Feels softer than kittens fur
All I need to do is
Look in your eyes
Then I find
Everything I
Need to
Relize


© 2009 Clare McShane



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7 comments:

Cathy said...

Wow !that's beautiful, especially from a third grader.
Maybe you should put it to music !

Erin said...

Wow! A third grader! She has special talent. This is beautiful!

BTW Lisa-stop by my blog, I have an award waiting for you!

Take care!

natalief said...

Beautiful, although I do wonder what she has been reading/watching at that age! I wrote this when I was eight.

mseds said...

That is beautiful and so insightful for such a young age! It's sweet of you to share it.

Diane J Standiford said...

Dang! I love kids! The magic they can make for us hardened adults.

BRAINCHEESE said...

Angels among us

Lanette said...

Beautiful. A future songwriter maybe?! :)

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